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I know not where it is, I should turn
As thoughts inside, begin to churn
An acid, meant to truly burn
A helpless moment, of which I yearn
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To cast away, the thoughtless words
From a hateful voice, it’s so absurd
To know that I’m not really heard
My patience, buried, now interred
*
Into hopelessness, I need to fight
To end this horrid, dreadful plight
That I endure, both day and night
For where there seems, no end in sight
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Nice!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Beautiful piece
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Please forgive the very late response. Thank you very much!
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iLife it all but that second verse hit home! GREAT WRITE
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I like it all lol
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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The darkness captured in such emotive language- speaks volumes😊
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Thank you very much 😊
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You are a very good poet.
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Thank you, Keith 😊
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Welcome back! 😊
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Not really back yet. Just a quick drop in 😊
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This is very heavy. Hope you are okay. I know you’ve been dealing with a lot.
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I have given it to the Lord. Whatever His plan is, I will follow. I’m ok. Thank you, my friend.
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Take care. I am holding you in my thoughts.
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Thank you.
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You are welcome, dear one.
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🙂👏💜Great writing.
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Thanks so much, Amanda 💕
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You are Welcome Dorinda 🙂🌸💜
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