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The moments ticked away,
one last hour left, before
He’d roll over, to find her lying,
next to him, no more
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Pulled out his pocket watch, checked the time, and when
He thought he had plenty of it, he fell asleep, again
Jumped straight up, panicked, brushed his hand across the bed
She was still there with him, but, he had to clear his head
Of course he could, turn back time, yes, that’s how he’d do it!
Letting out a sigh of relief, he thought he almost blew it
Quietly, he opened the watch, to expose the delicate hands
Turned them counterclockwise, and thought himself quite grand.
But then he checked the watch again, it hadn’t moved a minute!
It was then, he must have realized, there was a dead battery in it!
How did he not know this, she couldn’t leave, before he told her
But it was already too late, she was gone, he couldn’t hold her
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She had her mind set, long ago, she seized the perfect chance
To leave him, she had had enough, this was her time to dance
See, she’s the one who took the battery out, he had no idea
She knew about his little tryst, with the local floozy, Sophia
No more late night playboys, this girl needed her own thrill
Donned her best, and headed out, tonight, was her time to kill.
Author’s Note: Can you see her figure in the shape of the poem? This is called Concrete poetry or Shape poetry. (Probably seen better on a PC than a phone) 😉
January Writing Prompt – Time was running out and his watch had stopped dead – Day 26/31
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p.s. got you followed over on the BookBub finally! Keep writing lol
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Thanks! I appreciate it! 🙂
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Ha you got me to come over here from the reader,! and i cant tell the shape. Oh well and yes i am on a library computer, well i shall visit your posts a few mo while here 🙂
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Yeah, I have a very vivid imagination. It’s there but unless you know it’s there, you probably won’t see it. The poem, as a whole, is the hourglass shape of a woman.
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🙂
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Concrete or shape poetry, this was new. It was a powerful read I can say that, I’m not to sure what you mean about seeing her shape in the poem.
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Thanks, Charly 🙂 If you look at the poem as a whole, you can see the hourglass figure of a woman. I’m not sure you can see it clearly if you’re looking from a phone.
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No phone here, but I can look it through a magnifying glass and still nothing…. Never the less what I was interested was the writing.
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It’s the whole poem, from top to bottom lol Thanks for trying! 🙂
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I got played….
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lol no you didn’t!! Honest, she’s there, but I can see why you don’t see her. Sigh. I shall try harder next time 🙂
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Ha…Touche ’
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Why not? lol 🙂
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Agreed!
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