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In a battle of power
Colliding, one into the other
Clashing, crashing
A calamitous clamor
Like a toddler
Incessantly banging a drum
The rhythm of beautiful noise
The Daily Post: Constant
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WaltPage said:
To a drummer, a toddler incessantly banging a drum is NOT a calamitous clamor! It is pure love, “the rhythm of beautiful noise”. 😊💛
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Ha! Music to my ears, too. Hubby plays piano, so music was always here. He hasn’t played in years…I’m tired of dusting the piano!!
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WaltPage said:
Take lessons 😊
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I would love to, my friend, but because of my condition, I have no feeling in my left hand, I’m numb. The fingers have a mind of their own. I used to play, guitar & clarinet, but no more 😦
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WaltPage said:
I’m sorry. 😢
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Don’t be! I’m living life and loving it. not much keeps me down, but it does remind me to slow down, something I don’t agree with lol
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WaltPage said:
Believe me, I know that feeling.
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Erika Kind said:
We love thunderstorms… don’t we? 😊
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh yes, we do ❤
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Erika Kind said:
💖
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you for sharing! ❤
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mihrank said:
beautiful lines – “Thunderstorms are as much our friends as the sunshine.”
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I prefer thunderstorms…stirs the dark side 😉
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lovesdeepwaters said:
Lovely, my attempts at free verse always end up rhyming
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh yes, I know that feeling! Keep trying! Thank you for reading 🙂
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
I really love this. I wish I wrote it.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
You could always add to it, with your own words 😉
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
LOL I wouldn’t dare. But, I wanted to let you know how I adored it. Can’t explain why, but it touched a chord inside me.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, my friend. That means a lot to me 🙂
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