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She blends with the mist
In the soft moonlight
Heading for the castle
In the pitch of night
Frost covered fields
Beneath her bare feet
Still, she feels no cold
Walking over the wheat
Anxious to arrive
At her true destination
She appears to float
Without hesitation
Empty place, once her home
Has beckoned for her return
Though now only spirit
For this, her heart did yearn
Hidden in shadows, he awaits
Watching, his sweet lady fair
He reaches out, to slow her pace
But somehow, she isn’t there
Like dew in the morning
She has just disappeared
His love, now apparition
Gone, again, til next year…
©2021 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Image by Darkmoon_Art from Pixabay
The warmth in the second stanza is alive with the magic of folklore!
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Thank you! 😊
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Amazing dance of words dear Dorinda.
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Thanks so very much, John. Hope all is well.
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I am doing fine dear Dorinda and you are welcome. I hope you are doing well and enjoying the days of Halloween.
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I’m doing well, thank you, John. Happy to hear your are, too.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry shared by a talented writer.
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Thank you for sharing ❤️
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You are welcome dear Dorinda.
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Dorinda, this is stunning. My favorite stanzas are 2, 5, and 6. It’s so powerful in execution, and inspiring in delivery.
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Thank you so much, Leon. So happy you enjoyed! 😊
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Doncha hate that when that happens…
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What’s another year? 😂
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