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Shards of crystal prisms fly
Broken pieces, its time to die
Left, an empty shell, I cry
Impossible to put back together
Trying to do too many things
Mind elsewhere, disaster brings
Oh, how I wish that I had wings
To escape this stormy weather
Funny, how life keeps its pace
As tears still stain this aging face
I pray to God for saving grace
Please, free me from this tether
Let me float among the clouds
Spread my wings, and cry aloud
My voice, be heard, no longer shroud
My heart, soars, light as a feather
For He does take my feeble hand
Grasps it tightly, a feeling, grand
“Know now, this is what I’ve planned
Fear not, child, the days will get better.”
©2020 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Dorinda, so heartfelt – painful yet with hope that inspires us all.
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Thank you, my friend. Ironically, the poem comes from me dropping a glass pot lid and watching as the shards scattered on the tile floor. I looked at it and said, God, I hope tomorrow will be better.
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Ah…we all have our breaking points and for some us (lucky ones) we turn it into poetry.
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❤️
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This is beautiful writing 😍
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Thank you very much, Jude! 🙂
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My pleasure 🌼
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Such anguish with a final note of hopefulness.
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Thanks so much, Derrick! 🙂
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My friends is crying words of tears.
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“words of tears”… I like that. 🙂
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Beautiful. You are so talented in both content and style. I hope “better” will come soon.
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Thank you so much, Oneta. Only one person knows when better will be. And I trust Him with all my heart. ❤
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Lovely poem and sentiment Dorinda.
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Thanks so much, Brad! 🙂
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This is a very powerful poem, Dorinda.
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Thank you very much, Robbie. ❤
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Very evocative
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Another one of your poems that made me stop and think. I found comfort in this one.
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Thank you, Priscilla. He is always there to comfort us, even when we think He’s not. ❤
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I love your poetry, it always, it’s a cord with me.
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Thank you very much, Brenda. And thank you for sharing to Facebook!! ❤
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