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Sun sets and moon glows, over water
Sitting on the dock, alone, a daughter
Forgotten child, hides from the light
Pondering, what to do, this night
Ocean calms, a heart beats fast
She makes a decision, final, the last
He left her standing at the altar
Tears flowing, like a sea of salt
Her body sank, her legs did falter
Knowing, in her heart, it was her fault
Moon sets and sun glows bright
Morning, does quietly awaken
Left, an umbrella, no one in sight
For her, love is now, eternally forsaken…
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This is so beautiful! 💜
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Indescribably beautiful but very sad…
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Written on a very gloomy day… Thank you ❤
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This is amazingly written, I read it through twice
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Thank you, Jude, I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! ❤
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No problem Dee, when I follow, I usually make time to read
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Wow, very touching, Dorinda.
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Thank you very much, Erika ❤
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You are welcome, Dorinda 😊
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Lovely. (not generic lovely, but true to root of word lovely)
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Excellent poem !! Love it 👍
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Thank you very much! 😊
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