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The crows were squawking, as loud as could be
My sister and I, were hiding, by the old tree
The witch, with her lantern, looking all around
I whispered to sister, “Now don’t make a sound!”
“I know you’re here” said the witch to the air
“I sense your presence, I feel your despair!”
Silly old hag, surely you couldn’t know why
Two little girls would want, on you, to spy
But the witch did know, and it was plain to see
Sister and I were trapped, no way to get free!
The vines from the tree, slithering like a snake
Wrapping themselves around us, no way we could break
It seems we were tricked, by our own curiosity
Caught in the woods, no treat, this monstrosity
We knew we overstepped, but what could we do?
So we jumped out from behind, and simply yelled, BOO!
“What a treat!” said the witch, who couldn’t help but smile
“Do come in, sit, and chat with me, for a while.”
But we knew better, pleading, “please let us leave here”
“Ha! It’s too late for that!” she said with a sneer
With a hiss from her lips, she warned, once again
“For now, you’re alive, but you will feel my bane
When ghosts come a calling, and crows circle high
It’s your time to leave, without saying goodbye…”
©2019 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Photo: Pixabay
I do hope you intend “to be continued.” I love how you craft your poems 😊❤
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Open ended, leaves more to the imagination. 😉❤️
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How are you feeling?
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Eh. I’ll email you later or tomorrow to fill you in.
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😕😯
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And of course, I forgot lol
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Age hehehe
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Boy, you’re not kidding lol
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Im lost… Wandering… Ill…
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I don’t like the sound of that…
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Just not doing well…
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Oh no, that doesn’t make me happy. 😔
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Nor me… it will pass… love to you, Neil and Alyssa ❤
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Yes, it will! Always in my prayers, dear friend. Love to you, Susan and all the fur balls!! ❤
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Thanks Lady D. 💜 Insurance turned Down my request for a lymphedema pump for my swollen and oozing legs and feet. I start at the Wound Clinic on the 15th. I’m just discouraged and tired. Hugs! 💛
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Shame on insurance. I will never understand any of it. Hugs to you, Sir Walt! ❤
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💛
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Love it!
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Thank you so much, Bette! ❤
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Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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This is a fun one for Halloween!
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Except in the end! lol Thank you!! ❤
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A great poem, Dorinda. A bit Hansel and Gretally.
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Yes, without all the goodies! Thanks, Robbie! ❤
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This is a fun one. 🙂
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Thank you, L.K.! 🙂
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Oo-er
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Thanks, Derrick 😉
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Reblogged this on GrannyMoon's Morning Feast.
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