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Colleen’s poetry challenge for this week is synonyms only! Her two words are Empty and Space. Check out Colleen’s blog to find which forms of poetry are acceptable for this challenge. Have fun!
Written as a Cinquain, my synonyms are Desolate and Expanse.
This vast expanse
So desolate, barren
Lays in waste, Mother Earth cries
Abuse
Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 148 #SynonymsOnly
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Hi, Dorinda! I love this! Your Cinquain paints a poignant picture with its intense imagery. Hopefully, this will never come to pass. 😮 ❤
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Thank you, Vashti! My hope, also. ❤️
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It is abuse, and like other kinds, people don’t really know what they can do about it !
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Never enough information out there concerning any type of abuse. Sad world we live in. 😦
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Very good, Sis. I like where you went with this! ❤
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Thanks, Sis! Couldn’t miss this weeks. Trying to stay on top of things. ❤
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Good job! Glad you made it! ❤️
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Great job,
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Right away checking it out now
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Didactic art is what people need today. Great work!
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Thank you very much! 😊
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Feels like a dark prophecy.
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If the world doesn’t wake up, dark is exactly what it could be. ☹️
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That’s why we need to look at the bright side in order to see how we can realize it.
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We need everyone to do that!!
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Yes, we need EVERYONE!!!
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