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This week, Colleen challenges us with the words Origin and Write. Remember, synonyms only to write your poetry!!
Written as a Double Etheree, my synonyms are Connection and Record.
I
Record
My feelings
Until I sense
The true connection
To the words, now fated
On what was but a blank page
Of plain white emptiness; my soul
Once hidden behind the darkened ink
Escapes, to become this glorious light
A fire which I cannot extinguish
The one I wish never to be tamed
For my spirit breathes in the life
Born, to these withering hands
That still continue forth
Never backing down
Until at last
Depleted
I am
Spent
Colleen’s Weekly Poetry Challenge – Origin and Write
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This is beautiful, Dorinda! ๐
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Thank you very much, Susi! ๐
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You’re welcome! ๐
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pouring the heart out…(K)
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Always. Thanks, K ๐
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Love the flow of this poem!!
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Thanks so very much, Holly! ๐
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You have a knack for making your poems move along naturally. I enjoy reading them!!
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Oh, thank you! That’s so wonderful to hear! โค
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I can feel the intense yearning and desire to create in this! Nice job.
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Thank you very much, H.R.R.!! ๐
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Wonderful double etheree Dorinda… love it.. xx
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Thanks so much, Sally! I loved yours, too!! โค
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Splendid double Etheree. Dorinda.
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Thank you very much, Helene!
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Wow!! This double Etheree is fabulous, Dorinda. So much meaning and passion in your words. Whew!! โค
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Thanks so much, Colleen! I am trying to broaden my writing a bit. I think I started with your challenge!! โค
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Weโll itโs fabulous! โค๏ธ
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Thank you โค
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Good job!
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Thank you!
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