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The lovely Helene of Willow Poetry has challenged us with “What do you See?”. You may write a poem, haiku, tanka or short story that represents what you see or feel within you. More info can be found in the link below.
I have traveled far
Ice beneath my feet
The full moon
My guiding star
Shining ever sweet
My staff aglow
As I step closer
To this place
Where
Inside my heart
I hold an empty space
The castle lights are bright
Each a single flame
Perhaps, lit
For my approach
From whence I came
I’ve still, a father path
To follow, to the door
Where I can embrace
My loved one
Forevermore
The snowy plains
And mounts
Have been good to me
Allowing this
Half-hearted body
To take me, safely
One final length
To my journey
Soon I will be there
To seal the hole
Long ago left
By my departed lady fair
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Photo via Willow Poetry – What do you See?
Life’s journey coming full circle, there is so much in this.
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Thank you very much.
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Pleasure
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This was an enjoyable read Dorinda, well crafted?
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Dorinda, I felt this all the way through, beautifully written.
A big sigh when I read the following words:
“One final length
To my journey”
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Thanks so very much, Helene. I really loved this photo.
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My pleasure Dorinda, now you can go around and read…lol
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Yes! 🙂
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Do you mean in this picture and do I need the picture for it?
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Are you asking about the hashtag? That’s the name of Helene’s photo challenge.
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Do I write about what I see in.the picture and can I use the image for my post for this?
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Yes. If you click the link under my copyright you’ll find all the info there. Join in!! It’s great fun!
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Thank you.
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You’re welcome. Have fun!
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