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On the bed sheets, a ring of gold
Along with a hand written note
No idea what she should be sorry for
Still, he felt a lump grow, in his throat
The small circle, of polished gold
Cast a shadow, in the shape of a heart
Suddenly, it dawned on him
His life, was falling apart
His state of affairs, no longer relevant
She was gone, without even goodbye
His heart, broken, into shattered pieces
When he realized, it had all been a lie
May Writing Prompt: Cylindrical Circumstances – Day 9/31
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Nice poetry Dorinda!
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Thank you very much! Happy to have you along on my journey 🙂
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Such deep words…. 💔
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Luckily, I do not live them. Thank you for reading 🙂
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I like how you express the thoughts to that image.
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Thank you very much, Erika!
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You are welcome, Dorinda!
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What a cruel way to say goodbye to someone. Great poem! 😉
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I know! Thank you very much, Michelle 🙂
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😉
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You should throw a party for the poor guy! ☺❤
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Oh sure, I’ll invite the neighborhood. Maybe he’ll get lucky 😉
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Never can tell, lol
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Very true lol
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you! ❤
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The simplest concepts sometimes inflict the strongest of emotion. This did it for me.
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We get our inspirations for writing from those of us around us. Be strong. You know you can! 🙂
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Painful. I know a man whose wife did this very thing – after 25 years.
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Ouch. I can’t even imagine…
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So good, Dor.
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Thanks so much, Rita! ❤
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