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The humidity was stifling
Her hair was quite the mess
Sweat dripped from her lashes
Down her cheek, onto her dress
She tried her best to hide it
This was not her usual style
Always cool and collected
She was becoming more hostile
The doorman glanced, curiously
After all, she wasn’t at her best
“You look very lovely today.”
“Surely, sir, you must jest
I’m saturated, like a sponge
Your pleasantries are inane
I’m soaked right through, can’t you see?
From standing in the rain!”
A sky as blue as the lady’s eyes
Not a single cloud could be seen
But, he opened up his umbrella
After all, she was the Queen
May Writing Prompt: Saturated pleasantries – Day 8/31
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Great use of the prompt! 😉 I always love the story ones.
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Trying different approaches, having fun with it! Thanks, M!
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Yeah, me too. 😉
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This was very good.
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Thank you very much!
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Nicely done! A shame the other 50 people that liked it didn’t comment. Shakes head…. ☺❤
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I would love for others to comment! But, we are all busy, and I understand. ❤ 🙂
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Yeah but still…
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I get it, but it’s okay. xoxo
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you for sharing! ❤
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