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She draws you in, with hands like a vise
Promising days of sweet paradise
Crushing your will, the grip is tight
She’ll hold on, til the time is right
Her power over you, indeed, magnetic
Your earthly demise, no longer poetic
The Daily Post: Magnetic
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Night Owl Poetry - Dorinda Duclos 
you inspire me really
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Thank you very much! Keep writing!
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if only i can have you as a mentor
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You flatter me 🙂 I received your email, and at this time I’m afraid I cannot mentor you. I am dealing with some serious health issues that need my attention right now.
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i understand. i will keep on reading your work maybe this time 7 times a day. in my prayers you are
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Thank you 😊
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sounds like a right cow 🙂
Nice piece
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oh god its not you is it???
sorry
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What are you apologizing for?
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Saw another comment and for s moment thought id called u a cow …:/
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LOL Mooo! I believe your comment was “sounds like a right cow 🙂 Nice piece” What exactly does a right cow sound like 😉
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Think i will just….er…oh look a squirrel
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Love your work. All of it!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Ohhhhhhhhhh… I believe I like your dark side 🙂
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Oh yes, I happen to like my dark side much more than my light lol Thanks, Walt 😉
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One day perhaps my dark side will come out 🙂
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When you least expect it. I hid mine for quite some time until I decided to let her loose 😉
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You may be shocked 🙂
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Not much shocks me. Bring it on 🙂
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Ooooooooo… All in due time said the spider to the fly 🙂
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I’m patient….I’ll wait lol
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Good 🙂
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