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The sun sets fire, to the night
As moon no longer, holds its flight
Sinking deeply, in ocean’s waves
The sky, now blackened, darkness caves
For we, no longer, will see him shine
Drowned beneath the water’s brine
So, we hang our heads, as we say goodbye
And mourn, the darkness of the sky
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Stunning!
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Thank you very much, Kim! 🙂
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So beautiful!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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My pleasure!
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Hmmmm interesting 🙂
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Oh? Do tell. What are your thoughts?
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I sense a small undertone of the fight between darkness and light…I may be well off in my interpretation, haha but that’s what makes poetry so fascinating. Lovely piece.
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That’s an interesting interpretation! I was leaning more toward the carelessness of man and the environment, to the point, the moon no longer held its place among the stars. But I can definitely see your aspect of it! Thank you ❤
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Welcome Dorinda 🙂
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