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Disenchanted, my heart disbands
As pieces fall into your hands
Memories cast aside as none
Broken more, become undone
Once so perfect, in every way
Now so bitter, we cannot stay
We’ve fallen into this empty space
Love’s gone forever, without a trace
Source: The Daily Post – Bitter
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Night Owl Poetry - Dorinda Duclos 
Another Beautiful Dark Tragedy. 🌹🌹😎
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Splendid write!
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A melancholy one. Beautifully written, Dorinda.
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Thank you very much, Diana 🙂
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Very well written, Dorinda. I certainly could feel the loss expressed in your poem!
Steve
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Thank you, Steve! i do hope you’ve found the light by now…electricity that is lol
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Very good, Dorinda. I believe I still had the light even in the darkness…
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Always 🙂
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🙂
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A very good poem. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, Henrietta 🙂
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You are welcome!
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