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Through ruins, I try to make my escape
Unable to see, yet I sense my mistake
Moving about, with no reason nor rhyme
Knowing, so well, I’m near out of time
Can’t remove this mask, there’s no point in asking
Dare to take one more step, I feel my life crashing
Trying to run, from what I fear most
I find myself, floating, as now I am a ghost
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I like your poetry.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Fantabulous! 🌹🌹🌹
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Thank you, Dorna! ❤
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Compellingly haunting! ❤ it!
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Thank you very much, Tamara! 🙂
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You’re quite welcome Dorinda! Truly enjoyed 🙂
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This stirs many thoughts as good writing should do! Have a wonderful evening and may God bless you and yours!
Steve
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Thank you, Steve! Always appreciate your very kind comments 🙂
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It is always my pleasure to read your work!
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