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Sunlit swirls of passageways, lead me through an endless maze
Back and forth, round and round, corridors that do confound
Left turn here, then go right, I’m pretty sure I’ve seen this sight
A perplexity which does conceal, deep underground, a world surreal
Brick and mortar, interlace, no exit to escape this place
I’ll keep running through the halls, ever lost inside these walls
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
This was really good
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so much, Drew! Have a great weekend! 🙂
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
Thanks. You too.
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Ryo112358 said:
Love this poem!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much!! 🙂
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moonskittles said:
I really like the etheral feeling of this piece. Those mind mazes can always be difficult to get out of.
Enjoy a gorgeous weekend Dorinda!
Dajena 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much, Dajena! Have a wonderful weekend, too 🙂
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moonskittles said:
Thank you 🙂
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Morgan said:
this network of corridors reminds me of The Temple 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Reminds me I need to get out more lol 🙂
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Richard Ankers said:
I thought you never saw the sun? ;p
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I don’t, I just keep slamming into walls, creates a certain blackness in ones mind LOL
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Richard Ankers said:
Me too 😄
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh good, I don’t like being alone in the dark (I lie lol)
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Richard Ankers said:
🤔😳😄
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