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By the look on her face, in this empty space
Feelings of sorrow must fill this place
No one around, on this hardened ground
Echoing footsteps, nary making a sound
What was once here, no longer clear
She watched how easily, it could disappear
Held on til the end, body broke, didn’t bend
Perhaps it is better to merely pretend
But joy did fade, when it should have stayed
Mind games, something they always played
Gone, is the time, remembered, sublime
Knocked down, sadly, before her prime
Unable to stand, not what she had planned
Longing for the life, she once held so grand
Photos on the wall, surely tell it all
Faded, with memories, her rise to her fall
In a class all her own, no history sown
Worthless, dejected, left there alone
Ballerina dance! Pointed toes, pure romance
Heartbroken, never given the chance…
September Writing Prompt – #22 In a class all her own
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Amazing as always.
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Thank you so very much, Brenda! ❤
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I second that! 🙂
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I’m blushing… ❤
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🙂 ❤ xoxo
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Really enjoyed this!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Oh, this is so sad, Dorinda.
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It fits my mood lately. Thank you, Robbie ❤
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Such a sad one… 😔 but beautifully written. ❤️
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Thank so much, M! I’ve missed your prompts! ❤
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Dorinda, this is ❤️
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Thanks so much, my friend! ❤
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Oh, so perfectly captures the defeat 😔
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Thanks so much, D! ❤
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