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Imagine yourself swimming, in a bowl full of jello
You start to feel soothed, and somewhat mellow
You move your arms, doing the crawl as you go
Kicking and splashing, you move, to and fro
You’re trying to swim, but things get a bit sticky
Thus, finding out quickly, this is getting too tricky
You’re starting to slip, so you grab for the door
Oops! There goes the jello, rolling onto the floor!
Before it gets away from you, and you lose control
You try adding some fresh raspberries to the bowl
But they do not help, they’re just taking up room
And you realize the fruit, you’ll have to exhume
No worries, after all, they are still quite edible
And even jello without fruit, still tastes incredible
So try this next time, you crave this jiggly treat
Dip a spoon in, instead, and forget about your feet
March Writing Prompts – Swimming through raspberry jello – Day 12/31
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What a hoot. This would be perfect for a children’s poetry anthology! I know one 6-year-old who would laugh his head off. 🙂
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Only if I an get you to illustrate it 😉
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Ha! Thanks for the laugh. 🙂
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Aw shucks, and here I thought you’d jump right in 😉
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🙂
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Well, you’d think that a hard prompt, but you nailed it! Not that I’m going to try it anytime soon! 😂 However, it reminded me of an old video done by the boy band, Take That, possibly early 1990’s, where they end up dancing & rolling in (jello) or jelly, as we call it…very crazy!
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Thank you very much! Oh, do give it a try!! Michelle is challenging all this month, with her prompts. Now I have to find the video just to see it! 🤣
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Haha! Well, if you didn’t find the video, it’s called “Do What U Like” by Take That..dear, oh dear..I wonder if they cringe when they see it, now they’re in their 40’s?! 😂 You never know, I may try a prompt one day 😊
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Would love to see you join in! 🙂
I imagine they had a lot of fun making the video. It would make a great work out song. Had a good beat. 🙂
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I’m sure they did, I’ve seen them talk about it on the odd tv programme..no regrets, I don’t think! 🤣
Thank you, Dorinda, I might surprise you one day! 😊
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