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Summer blooms, among the trees
Their gentle fragrance lingers
As it wafts in the morning breeze
But you must be extra careful
Don’t get to close to the Hollyhocks
The bees won’t like you snooping
Be prepared for an aftershock
No, not the thorns on the stems
Although, they will prick you, too
You see, honeybees give no warning
And they’ll sting, it’s what they do
But be aware, these bees are the only ones
To die after they leave their stinger
We need to take good care of them
Or our Earth may no longer linger
August Writing Prompt – Hollyhocks and aftershocks – Day 26/31
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This is so wild. I could have sworn I commented on this. It is quite lovely and poignant!
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Thank you very much. It’s possible your comment wound up in spam. I haven’t checked lately 😦
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Lol! Possibly. I came here because of Mike. I’m only sorry I hadn’t found you out until now. Love your blog.
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Mike? Help me out, I know a few LOL I’m glad you decided to stop by. I really appreciate it 🙂
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Mike Afterwards!
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Ooooooh!!! I call him Michael lol
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😂 🙌 I do think he’ll answer to either one! Sometimes I don’t even bother. I’ll say… “Hey you! Afterwards!”
Lol!
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😂🤣😂
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I didn’t know that a honeybee will die after it leaves its stinger in you – better to not harm you or the bee by peering at the hollyhocks. The poor bees these days also have to deal with insecticide that is killing them off … without bees we lose more than just honey unfortunately.
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Yes, they are the only bees that do. We humans better wake up…before it’s too late 😦
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I agree with you there Dorinda. I was going to pass your post on to Tom Peace as I thought he would find it interesting and I saw he had already weighed in. 🙂
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Thanks, Linda. Yes, Tom was here 😉 I love his blog. So many interesting things! 🙂
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Yes I do too Dorinda – I have learned many things from his writing and his pictures.
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Same here!! Rock on, Tom! 😉
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enjoyed (and yes they do sting
feet too , true to my garden days when i wore f lip flops……..no more )
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Best to leave them bee 😉
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The bees are so active here right now and I can tell they’re happy about my letting my mints go to bloom. 🙂
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Here, too. I try to get them in flight but the buggers are quick! 🙂
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Humans have a way of destroying things. Killing things. Hurting things. And each other.
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Yes, we do. Shame on all of us!
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Yes. ☺💜
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Excellent poetry with wonderful message, Regards
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Yes, bees are in jeopardy… and without them, mankind is in jeopardy too!
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It’s very sad 😦
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Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
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Thank you for sharing, Henrietta! 🙂
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You are welcome!
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Einstein’s warning weaved into poetry. This is some good work.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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You are welcome
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Hopeful but alas we will likely kill them all!
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How sad that it’s a possibility. Awareness matters, spread the word! 🙂
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