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She is a natural beauty, with skin so fair
Her face reflects, in the water, where
The forest trees join her, in sweet repose
Though keeping an eye on her, lest she expose
The vulnerability, for just a moment or two
A vision of one, whose pain pulls her through
Never allowing the others, to find her like this
She keeps herself hidden, so near the abyss
Of water, before her, will she make the connection?
Is it really her, she sees, or merely nature’s reflection?
August Writing Prompt – Nature’s reflection – Day 10/31
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Francine Lindenberg said:
So beautiful, yes and vulnerable 💟
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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Neha Sharma said:
I love the note on which you ended this poem! Beautiful 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! 🙂
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Neha Sharma said:
My pleasure, Dorinda 🙂
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
Simply lovely ☺💙
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Sir Walt! 🙂 ❤
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AdnamaMarais.wordpress.com said:
Beautiful. 🙂💚⚘
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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AdnamaMarais.wordpress.com said:
You are Welcome.
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Tom's Nature-up-close Photography and Mindfulness Blog said:
Very nice and I’m glad her nose isn’t pierced! 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
OK, you made me laugh LOL Thank you, Tom!
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SarahC said:
and she gets an awesome picture to match her writing Again! awesome
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I tend to write a lot, then search forever for the right picture. Sometimes I tweak the poem/prose to match the photo. this time, the picture chose me first 🙂 Thanks so much, Sarah!!
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SarahC said:
🙂
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wild thing said:
Love!!!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much! 🙂
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