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Perchance to binge on Earthly time
A thought we humans find sublime
Still, we worry, this we must endure
A life that ends, of this we’re sure
Why rush, to get through every day
Those wasted hours, we threw away
Perhaps we need to slow it down
Take time to breathe, instead of drown
In things, that aren’t worth a dime
Turn back those dreaded sands of time
Take heed of this, I must implore
Before Heaven opens its only door
May Writing Prompt: Time binging – Day 4/31
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Really good Dorinda, and applicable to most people, I think.
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Thanks, Kim. Yes, I think we can all relate at some point.
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Can’t express how much I love this! The rhythm, the rhymes, the structure. I adore immensely.
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Thank you so very much!! ❤
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Good message, especially the last line.
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Thanks so much, V.J. 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you ❤
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So true.
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The world needs to slow its pace, before we leave this Earthly place…
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Lovely poem ❤
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Thank you very much, Maranda 🙂
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You sure nailed this one!! ☺❤
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Thanks so much, dear Walt! ❤ 🙂
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