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A whirlwind of unknowns
Each morning, I face them
A mirror image of who I am
But where do I need to be?
I overlook the important
To dwell in the mundane
Endlessly searching for me
Wondering where I went
Yet, never finding myself
It’s a brutal pattern
A continuous thread
Unraveling, dangling
With no scissors in sight
To cut away the fray
Until it is too late
Everything I have done
Denigrated, criticized
Until the attacks cease
Forever brought to an end
Authors Note: Just letting you know I am fine. My poetry, lately, has been reflective of those who are not fine. I am merely a voice for those who cannot speak…
©2018 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Photo via Pixabay CC0

Nice idea to put an Author’s Note on this kind of post 😊💛 I may borrow it sometimes if that’s ok.
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Of course. I usually get the “are you ok” private messages after I write something like that, so I figured I’d let everyone know ahead of time 😉
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Thanks! 💛
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Excellent as usual. Happy 2018
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Thank you so much! It’s so good to see you!!! Hope you’re doing well 😊
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I am well. Waiting for another surgery on my right eye. But getting the itch to get back to writing. Great to hear from you.
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Glad to hear you’re well, except for that right eye. Give it hell for me! And so happy to hear you want to write again!!!! I wish you well, Drew, hoping this will be the last surgery, and you’ll be back on the road to words 🙂
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Well. I just came from the Doctor and I was informed there is nothing we could do. Time to move on. Thanks for your kind wishes. I will be back next week. Be well.
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Hmmm, second opinion? I’m sorry to hear this. Look forward to your return 😊
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Your words!❤️
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Thank you very much! ❤
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Beautifully written but sad and I am glad you are ok!
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Thank you very much, Diane! 🙂
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