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She shot only once, to unleash the hell
Of flaming arrows, on those who dwell
Upon the grounds, so sacred, pure
Now laid in ruins, and left obscure
To all who dreamt, of life, ideal
A vision of beauty, life surreal
Came crashing down, among the brave
Sending them, to an early grave
Abolishing demons, was their plight
Saving others, they dared to fight
Where once there stood, quite profound
Their paradise, burning, to the ground
A wasteland, on which the earth, now shook
One simple arrow, was all it took
Writing Prompt – Flaming Arrows – Day 10/30
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overthehillontheyellowbrickroad said:
Really moving! I enjoyed this!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Cathi! 🙂
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WaltPage said:
Another beautiful poem! 😃❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Walt ❤
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WaltPage said:
My pleasure. Everything worked well together… Words… Rhythm… Picture..<3
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mihrank said:
your words comes from Paradise -spectacular!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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