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Light up the night like stars
Blazing a trail across the sky
A vision of hope in the dark
Writing Prompt: Floating lanterns – Day 23/31
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This may be short, but I can picture the scene completely. Leaves my mind to wander on it’s own… such a magical moment.
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Thanks, Michelle! Sometimes short works better (not haiku) for trying to convey a message 🙂
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You’re welcome and so true!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come read Dorinda’s beautiful “Floating Lanterns”
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Thanks for sharing, my friend! ❤
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You are so welcome. It was beautiful!
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Very beautiful 😃
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Thank you, dear friend ❤
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Thank you for the email with the information 😃
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My pleasure. Always here to lend a hand 🙂
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Oh, this is such a beautiful piece. Loved your comparison and the photo is really great! We sent these off as a kid. Looking back and at the commerical they show on TV the thought now runs through my head – Man, that’s a real fire hazard. LOL! Time changes us, doesn’t it?
Chuck
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Sheesh, Chuck, nothing like taking the romance out of candles LOL Thank you, my friend 🙂
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Ha! You are too funny, but right I guess. That was kind of like a Sheldon comment on Big Bang! Sorry! They are romantic and I told you I sent some off as a kid too. See what being an old geezer does! Makes you think about the consequences. Good thing we didn’t do that when we were younger! LOL!
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Old geezer…pfft. just exactly how old is a geezer? lol
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