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She draws you in, with hands like a vise
Promising days of sweet paradise
Crushing your will, the grip is tight
She’ll hold on, til the time is right
Her power over you, indeed, magnetic
Your earthly demise, no longer poetic
The Daily Post: Magnetic
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houstontich said:
you inspire me really
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! Keep writing!
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houstontich said:
if only i can have you as a mentor
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Dorinda Duclos said:
You flatter me 🙂 I received your email, and at this time I’m afraid I cannot mentor you. I am dealing with some serious health issues that need my attention right now.
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houstontich said:
i understand. i will keep on reading your work maybe this time 7 times a day. in my prayers you are
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you 😊
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Michael said:
sounds like a right cow 🙂
Nice piece
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Michael said:
oh god its not you is it???
sorry
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Dorinda Duclos said:
What are you apologizing for?
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Michael said:
Saw another comment and for s moment thought id called u a cow …:/
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Dorinda Duclos said:
LOL Mooo! I believe your comment was “sounds like a right cow 🙂 Nice piece” What exactly does a right cow sound like 😉
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Michael said:
Think i will just….er…oh look a squirrel
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ghostwriter said:
Love your work. All of it!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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WaltPage said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh… I believe I like your dark side 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh yes, I happen to like my dark side much more than my light lol Thanks, Walt 😉
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WaltPage said:
One day perhaps my dark side will come out 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
When you least expect it. I hid mine for quite some time until I decided to let her loose 😉
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WaltPage said:
You may be shocked 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Not much shocks me. Bring it on 🙂
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WaltPage said:
Ooooooooo… All in due time said the spider to the fly 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’m patient….I’ll wait lol
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WaltPage said:
Good 🙂
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