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The caffeine hadn’t kicked in yet. Even toothpicks wouldn’t have held these eyes open. They’d snap from the weight of my lids. Half asleep, I stood there, in a daze, trying to remember what had happened the night before. The elves, hammering away in my head, reassured me they hadn’t forgotten. These blackouts were becoming worrisome, not to mention altogether dangerous.
I glanced around the room, still not quite sure where I was. In the distance, I could make out the Manhattan skyline, lazily communing with the haze of morning. The view was a bit daunting, what with my fear of heights, which was rather quickly enveloping me. I turned around, knowing I probably needed more coffee to steady my nerves, and found I had already drained the pot.
My only recourse was to venture out into the noise of the morning commuters. I threw on some clothes, staggered out the door, stepped onto the elevator and fell 20 floors. Lying at the bottom of the elevator shaft, I had, at last, awakened.
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“The elves, hammering away in my head, reassured me they hadn’t forgotten”
Oh the brilliant surreal. Just my cuppa tea.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Wow! This gave me the chills!
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Thank you very much, Diana. I’m trying to find a happy medium with my writing. I favor more dark, but there are lighter times too. Hard to figure which way I’m headed.
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Both? Perhaps you don’t need to pick one 😀
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You may be right! I’ll just go with the flow, wherever it take me 🙂
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From a reader perspective, the variety is interesting. Do what make you feel creative, happy, and energized. Have fun. 😀
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Ouch!!
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Nightmares can be quite painful, don’t you think?
When did you change your gravatar? Great picture!
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Oh, they can… experienced that too…. Thank you, just did it yesterday. I still need to get used to it too …. lol!
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You look wonderful! You have a great smile 😀
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I can honestly say, that’s me 😀
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