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And I close my eyes and listen
To the gentle echoing sounds
Of rain splashing upon my thoughts
Amidst God’s almighty thunder
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This was such a wonderful piece. Majestic and elegant while remaining simple in words but panoramic in imagery. Kudos!! Very well done.
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Thank you very much! I most certainly will 🙂
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I loved this the first time but even more on a reread and the line – “Of rain splashing upon my thoughts”. So beautiful and creative!
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Thank you again 🙂
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Fabulous!
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Thank you 🙂
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Absolutely lovely writing
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Thank you very much, Erika! 🙂
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Oh. Love this one, Dorinda. Short and yet it feels epic!
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Oh, epic!! I like that! Thank you very much, Diana!! 🙂
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