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If you look closely upon this place
Perhaps you’ll see the captain’s face
Hands on wheel, to steer his boat
The hull of which shall never float
Again upon the endless sea
For once a mighty shipman, he
Could not save his precious vessel
Washed ashore, forever nestled
From the waters, onto the land
Forever lost, in grains of sand
©2016 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Photo: Pixabay
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Thank you! 🙂
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Aww! A boat in the afterlife. Well done
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Yes!! and why not? Who says we are the only entity allowed to carry on! So glad to see you back. ❤
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Thank you Dorinda it is good to be back. My thinking if we are from the same creative force do we not meld all together again in that force melding equally.
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Exactly! So glad you saw what I was trying to convey!!
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You gave the stranded boat life with this poem! Dramatic and beautiful!
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Thank you very much, Erika! 🙂
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I loved to imagine how it was before! Great idea!
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Delightful metaphors abound here…Love that last line! 😉 Hugs!
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Thank you very much, my friend! Hugs!
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My pleasure…..Hugs!
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