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Dazzling light, from up above
Scatter my thoughts, reminiscent of
Days when the world was airy and light
Setting the story, in the cool of the night
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When stars gathered round
With a sight, so profound
When my heart would display
Every word, everyday
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Dazzling light, from up above
Gather my thoughts, for the one I love
Make this energy glow in your sight
Scatter my heart in the warmth of your light
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Night Owl Poetry - Dorinda Duclos 
So beautiful Dorinda ❤
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Thank you, Julie 🙂
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beautiful 🙂 Happy Friday!
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Thank you, dear Morgan! Happy Friday to you, too! 🙂
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I love your poetry! So similar to mine
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Thank you, Amanda! I’m still reading your book and will be happy to leave a review for you 🙂
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Thanks so much!
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You’re welcome! Question? I’ve seen others call you Mellie. Which do you prefer?
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Either. Amanda is one of my pen names … and mellie is my name. I respond to both
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Ah, okay, thanks for letting me know 🙂
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I realize it can be confusing. I usually tag my works depending on what name it belongs. Ths now for asking. It’s nice to know there are readers out there with the interest 😊
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I always like to know who I’m chatting with. I don’t like to just say thanks 🙂
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I agree. It’s too impersonal. I mean sometimes when it’s the first connection thanks is all I got…. but I try my hardest to entise conversation. Why display work if you cant discuss it? …right?
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Right! 🙂
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With poetry I’ve noticed a few styles now …. rhythm and flow, statemwnts, and longer haiku style poems. May I ask what directs you towards rythem and flow?
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I like the sound that comes from it. I hope that the reader can pick up the cadence, my feelings, as I write. I occasionally do free-verse, but not often. I’ve been writing more haiku also, because sometimes a few words are all you need to say a lot 🙂 What inspires you to write?
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Honestly I couldnt of said that better myself. Those same reasons. I often play around with free verse. Personally, I prefer rythem and cadence. (Musical background) Honestly, I never understood haikus until RITU explained it them to me. How do you link bloggers in the comments?
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You have to be careful with haiku, some are not, they’re actually senryu, and some don’t follow the 5-7-5. And I have no idea how to tag a blogger short of copying and pasting the url LOL I don’t think you can
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Didn’t know how with the phone. Didn’t want to lose the reply
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I’m on my PC and I couldn’t figure it out. I’m going to say good night. It was great chatting. Looking forward to more 🙂
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