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She scolds me when I’m stupid
Though she’ll never use the word
It’s simply by, the look in her eye
That proves no words need be heard
I acknowledge with an uneasy sigh
But, somehow, it never soaks in
She looks at me and wonders why
I’d rather sink, than swim.
Things ingrained into me
From so very long ago
Are sorely hard to leave behind
For my own good, I need to, though
So I never let another
Drain my life, oh, how I’ve tried
As hard as I try to fight it
A part of me has died
To leave it in the past, tis true
I must heed what I am told
By one much younger than me
Who, with a simple hug, enfolds
Bringing comfort to my weary heart
Breathing life into my soul
My daughter shares her life-force
The thing from me, another stole…
©2020 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Image by Wolfgang Eckert from Pixabay
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Oof! Those special relationships, they certainly know how to be there for us. It’s a tender and loving bond that never goes away.
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Thanks so much for sharing this poem, Susi. I’m pretty sure 2021 wont be any different! lol
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You’re welcome, Dorinda! You’re probably right but I sure hope not. 😉
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It’s ok, she keeps me in line. lol
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Oh, the emotion you have packed into this piece, Dorinda! Just wow!! The empathy and sorry is palpable. Well-done.<3
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Thank you so, so very much, Susi. I’ve been struggling, trying to get back to me.
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You’re welcome, Dorinda! I’m sorry that it’s been a tough road for you. Hoping that you can fully recover. ((Hugs))
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This poem is pure, thunder! Speechless.
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Thank you so very much!!
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My pleasure! 💚
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A really terrific poem, Dorinda.
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Thank you, Robbie. I was supposed to release it on the 10th (her 30th birthday) but it wasn’t finished. Later is better than not at all! 😊
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