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Flowing throw my veins
Like the blood that rushes through me
Each pulse, a musical refrain
Lightning bolts, each dagger
Released by your command
A whisper, all it takes for me
To heed to your demand
Stroking my existence
I let you steal my soul
You, forever, my energy
As your power takes control
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Thank you kindly, my friend xoxoxo
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Oh I love this!
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Thank you, Marje!! 🙂
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The perfect metaphor for surrender, I think. It must be wonderful to feel like that!
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I imagine it would be, 🙂
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This is a terrific poem, Dorinda.
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Thank you so very much, Robbie! ❤
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Electrifying!
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Thank you, Syl! 😉
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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This is so sensual Dorinda!
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Thanks so much, Linda! ❤
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