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Yay!! Colleen is back with her poetry challenge. Boy, have I missed her! This week, the words are Beginning & Consume. Remember, synonyms are a must! Check out Colleen’s blog to find which forms of poetry are acceptable for this challenge. Have fun!
Written as a Shadorma, my synonyms are Boundaries and Depleted.
Depleted.
Once pure clean air, now,
Billowing
Noxious clouds.
Man oversteps boundaries
Wasted, climates cease.
Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 131 #SynonymsOnly
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True and sad.
So much said in so few words. Brilliantly done ♥️
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Hey, Sis!! This is spectacular. See the difference the punctuation makes? We all need to focus on that aspect of our poetry writing. Well done. ❤
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Oh, thanks, Sis! I feel so much better!! ❤
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I wrote a punctuation post today. It’s up on my blog now. Hopefully, that will help. ❤
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I saw it pop up in my email. Will get there at some point. ❤
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🥰❤️😍
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Kind of sad that we ignore it because for the most part we don’t see it. At least when there was smog we could see and feel it, so action was taken 🙂
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There’s still smog in many of the cities in the US. It’s the rest of the carelessness that really gets to me. 😦
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A lovely poem, Dorinda.
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Thank you, Robbie! 🙂
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