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My dearest Padawan, I have something, just for you
The droids reminded me, to give you something blue
Oh yes, and something red, although, I prefer all black
The elevator’s calling us, let’s move in, toward the back
No one else will follow us, trust me, this is true
But should they get too close, they’re easy to subdue
We can be together, all alone, in this elevator
You can be my chosen one, and I can be your Vader
(Snickering laugh)
(Back to heavy breathing)
Take these flowers, please, they’re making me wheeze!
A little levity on this day of passion and love! 😉 This was my original poem for ~M’s challenge. Then I just made it silly lol ❤
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This is so creative and funny. I love it!
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Thank you very much!! 🙂
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Sorry I pressed enter on my phone accident. Should be Fantastic write and I love it, Dorinda Duclos!
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That’s ok. I know it’s me lol Thank you very much! 🙂
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Awesome and you’re welcome!
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I knew Vader had a lighter side, lol!!
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Once you get past the heavy breathing LOL
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Hahaha 😀
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😀
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Good one! Loved it!
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Thank you!! ❤
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Haha love it!
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Thanks, Julie!! ❤
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Oh, you just created new colors for Valentine! Lovely, Dorinda!
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haha , not sure that’s a good Valentine color!! Thanks, Miriam ❤
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Yours is the second off color Valentine poem I’ve read today. It’s must be a new trend of interest. ❤
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I think we’re all tiring of red roses and pink hearts 😉
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My daughter Mercy and Will didn’t want to know boy or girl before delivery. She put on neutral color things on the register. After Autumn was born, the minute people knew they got a girl, all the pink things tumbling in. Imagine if everybody knew from the beginning!! 🙂
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We knew, with both our children. Luckily, it didn’t get overwhelming. i didn’t even make it to my son’s baby shower…he was a premie!!
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My daughter’s 28 weeks premie!! She stayed within the lower normal range of growth though. She’s beautiful and bright and was in the GATE program from 3rd to 4th grades. How much early was your son?
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Oh, she didn’t want to wait to see the world! My son was just over 35 weeks but was only 5lbs. Now he’s 6’ tall & 160 lbs. lol. My daughter was born at 34 wks. She was 4lbs11oz. Both were in the hospital several days. My son was also in the G&T. I’m very proud of my babies (not babies anymore ☹️)
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They are always your babies!! 🙂 🙂 Mercy was 1lb, 13oz. She was in the NICU for nine weeks, making up the time she missed in my tummy! 🙂
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I love her name. It’s perfect.
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The name fits her very well. ❤
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Haha love it
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Thanks, Michael! 🙂
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Lol! Love it!
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Thanks, Ritu! ❤
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Lol, good one!
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Thanks, Jacquie! ❤
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