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I could not explain
The desire I felt
When you were not here
The longing, for your touch
Your skin pressed against me
Locked together, unbreakable
You were the reason, my breath
Yet, I could not describe it
That overwhelming feeling
That emptiness inside
When you were far away
And I searched for the answers
Judged, by my own self doubt
My only conviction, is that I
Was guilty of loving only you
February Writing Prompt: Inexpressible Notions – Day 7/28
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Love this one so much!
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Thank you very much! ❤
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You’re welcome 😉
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A guiltiness we don’t need to feel guilty about!
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OK, explain!! lol I want to know what your take on this poem is!
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Uhm…. that will remain private… lol!! Isn’t that what writers/poets do? Creating individual pictures in the reader’s head… haha!
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Nice cover lol Yes, we paint with words 😉
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😄😉
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I love this. It is absolutely beautiful. I especially love the way you opened this. Great writing.
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Thank you very much, Drew! Always appreciate your comments 🙂
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This is beautiful….
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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Welcome. Hoping you would enjoy reading my works as well..
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… that’s so passionate… 🤗🤗🤗
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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🌹🌹🌹
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