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I sit with pen and paper
Thoughts are swirling in my head
Should I listen to my angel?
Or hear the devil’s words instead?
To choose the proper phrasing
I need to follow what’s in my heart
For my mind keeps playing tricks on me
And I knew right from the start
These two would cause a problem
When I saw them standing near
I wonder what there is to do
To make them disappear
Ignore them, if I can
And hope they leave quite soon
I need to write this letter
Before my honeymoon
Dear John, I guess I’ll start it
I no longer wish to marry
There are just too many of me
Over the threshold, for you, to carry
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That’s a wonderful take on confusions 😉
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Thank you, Aishwarya! 🙂
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An interesting poem to share with us, Dorinda. Well written!
Steve
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Thank you very much, Steve! Was feeling a bit silly, so I wrote whatever popped in my mind. Wonder if it was the angel or the devil I listened to 😉
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Lol…perhaps a little of both! Don’t we often do that?
Steve 🙂
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Of course. Laughter keeps peace in the soul, especially when the mouth speaks otherwise lol
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Very well put, young lady!
🙂
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Thank you! Especially the young lady part!! 😉
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Aw, you’re just a youngster, but a smart one and talented too!
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Now I’m blushing 🙂 Thank you again, my friend!
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You are very welcome, Dorinda…
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Brava.. To Thine Own Self Be True. 🌹😇
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Definitely. Thank you 🙂
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Wow! This one just grabbed me hard! Great one! 😀
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Thank you very much, Ally 🙂
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My pleasure. 😀
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