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A candle flickers, on the bedroom stand
This is the night, she so carefully planned
Her favorite book, laid by her side
She promised to read it, but knew that she lied
The pill bottle, there, on her white satin sheets
Open and empty, she’s falling asleep
Her thoughts start to wander, with dreams, unfulfilled
The rooms getting colder, her body now chilled
The flame, once so bright, is diminished instead
For she took her own life, when she made her own bed
Β©2017 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
Photo via Pixabay CC0
A beautiful tragedy is always soft spoken. Love this and the darkness to it.
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Thank you very much! π
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Beautiful tragedies.
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Indeed, very sad π¦ thank you
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A bit dark indeed but great written, Dorinda!
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Thanks, Erika. Still gives the shivers lol
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So… true store….. shivers indeed!
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Someone’s true story, although I know not who
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Whooo…. shivers again!
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Such a tradgedy this would be…. π
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Suicide is always tragic, for the one who feels no hope, and the ones they leave behind π¦
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Always…. I can’t bear the thought…. π
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No, me neither
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Powerful!
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Thank you very much, Rita!
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Intense! A step that many have contemplated but the Hand of the Lord denied. π β€
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We can only hope that others find His hand. Thank you, Natalie β€
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Amen DorindaβΌοΈββοΈ
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Startling !
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Yes, and very sad. Thank you for reading and commenting π
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This is chilling, but beautifully written Dorinda x
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Thank you very much, Ritu. It was a tough one but so many out there who think there is no hope π¦
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I know… a sad truth… π
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