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To ease the pain
Release the conscious
And float, again
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A broken heart
This gaping hole
An empty place
Her troubled soul
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Anguish dominates
Anxiety reigns
Hour after hour
Memories stain
*
A heart so shattered
Unsure, abandoned
Make them go away
Those with their hand in
*
Ripping apart
Nothing left, no beat
Lost in the fog
Of another defeat
©2020 Dorinda Duclos All Rights Reserved
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A Quiet Heart said:
I can’t help but feel the sorrow, so beautifully written.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much! 😊
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RecoveryWise said:
I reality enjoyed the rhyme, meter, and tone of this poem. The second to last stanza did trip me up, as it did not flow as the rest of the piece did. Lovely post.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you 🙂
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Sobia said:
Amazing. I hope you feel much better. 💕
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you. It will take time… ❤
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Philaric Mind said:
Excellent !!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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Sowmya RaviSankar said:
This is too good!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much!
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yourdeepthoughts said:
Beautiful ❤️ love the style as well
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! ❤️
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chasingseagulls said:
Wow… loved every line!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much!
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CarolCooks2 said:
How very beautiful Dorinda…Hugs x
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Carol.
From our FB conversation last night, I see the changes. Why they needed to do this is beyond me.
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lucillebonne said:
So tender, Thankyou for sharing
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you for reading, Lucille! 🙂
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Sahitra said:
The lines are so crisp yet striking. Beautiful….
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much. 🙂
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Christo N said:
Catharsis is a beautiful thing, good luck with your writing. Much love:)
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much. 🙂
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therealtintumon said:
‘Haunting’ is the word. Amazing work!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much. 🙂
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brendaarledge925 said:
Great poetry here🥀🥰
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much!
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Susi Bocks said:
((hugs))
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Dorinda Duclos said:
❤
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Susi Bocks said:
I hope you are doing well, Dorinda! ❤
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thereluctantpoet said:
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Chuck xoxoxo
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thereluctantpoet said:
Always happy and honored to share your posts with followers, My Dear!!!
Hope all is well with you and yours!!! Be safe!!
xoxoxo
😘💕💖🌹
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
Writing poetry cleanses our soul and helps ease our pain. I’m so glad to see you writing lovely poems again. God bless you Lady D, Hugs & Love to you. 😊💛
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Dorinda Duclos said:
❤
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
😎
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d.a.simpsonwriter said:
Very movingly evoked.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you.
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d.a.simpsonwriter said:
You’re welcome
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derrickjknight said:
May time bring ease
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Derrick.
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Sue said:
Hauntingly beautiful. Sending hugs 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much.
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Susan said:
You will overcome this moment dear. I’m sorry you are going through a rough time
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Susan said:
I love your style of writing. The bad days always end you’ll overcome. I’m wishing you good health and sending love to you
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Susan. ❤️
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Michael said:
Hugs
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Hugs back.
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Annette Rochelle Aben said:
❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
❤️
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V.J. Knutson said:
Letting it out is good. Your words are medicine for all our souls.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank so much, my friend. I’m having a rough time…
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V.J. Knutson said:
Understandably. Hugs
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Barbara Grace Lake said:
This, more than any of your excellent poems, Dorinda, is an opening into your heart.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so much, Barbara. I am trying to release the sorrow through my writing. When it comes to me, I let it out. ❤
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