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A rumble comes from deep within
This is the start, it shall begin
A challenge, unknown, will I win?
I brush it off, forgotten
Until the beast does comes alive
I pray, this demon, I’ll survive
But in my body, it does thrive
Its will is born, begotten
A battlefield, my body owns
With each movement, creaks and groans
Surviving, yet these aging bones
Have trouble standing tall
I grab my shield, my mighty sword
Victory shall be my reward
Up to the top, I move toward
I refuse to let me fall
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judeitakali said:
This is a deep lovely rhythmic poem
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Jude!
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thereluctantpoet said:
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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thereluctantpoet said:
Wonderfully done, Dorinda!! Might this be a bit autobiographical too? I love it even more if it is!! I’m praying hard for you, My Dear!!! Very hard!! And for heavens sake please, please don’t go out of the house. There is a great grocery shopping service we use, it’s ShipT Check them out it’s $49 on special for a yer and you can have them shop for you whenever!
xoxo
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Chuck. Yes, this is autobiographical.
The problem here isn’t haven’t someone shop for you. It’s the stores are empty! The shelves are bare. So we’re making do with what we have here..for now.
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thereluctantpoet said:
I’m hoping you aren’t having to go out, are you? I look at NJ numbers and I pray ever harder for You and yours, Dorinda!! Be safe, My Dear! Wish it wasn’t autobiographical – boo!
xoxo 🌹💖😘
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I don’t have to go out but I did have to yesterday. I’m okay, masked and ready for the rodeo lol NJ hasn’t seen the worst yet….
xoxoxo
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Miriam Hurdle said:
Determination is what we must have, Dorinda!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’m determined, Miriam!! ❤
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Miriam Hurdle said:
We need that, Dorinda!! ❤
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robertawrites235681907 said:
It sounds like you are still really struggling, Dorinda. Wishing you strength.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Robbie. I have good days and bad. My daughter usually calls me out on the bad ones. lol
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Francine Lindenberg said:
You have a heart full of love and pain. 💟
Sent from Cookie’s IPad
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I do… ❤
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V.J. Knutson said:
We are strong of spirit; keep going!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Facing every challenge the best I can. I know you are, too!
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WildHeart said:
So inspiring ❣️💕
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! ❤
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