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Through the haze of snow
We daydream of warmer times
Sand between our toes
Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #282 Haze & Sand
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Night Owl Poetry - Dorinda Duclos 
Beautiful Haiku! I am not well-versed in Haiku poetry criticism but as an amateur Haiku learner, I find this piece to be beautifully written. I love your imagery, and I love the strong feeling of the warmth of romantic love this short piece conveyed. I wish I could write a better commentary on this piece, as that is what this poem deserves. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you so very much!! ❤
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The imagery in this poem, is so vivid.
It really created a wonderful picture.
I enjoyed reading this poem.
Thank you for sharing this with us. 🙂
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Thank you very much for reading it! 🙂
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No problem, you’re very welcome.
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Excellent contrast and vivid imagery. Thanks for sharing.
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So sorry for the late response. Thank you very much for reading! 🙂
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I really do!!!
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Me, too!
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Accessible, concise, vivid and profound.
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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beautiful!
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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you’re welcome!
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Exquisite poem Dorinda. I miss snow living in Arkansas, but not the long cold winter. I guess we’re all trying to capture sand. 🙂
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Thank you, Brad! I’d like to miss the long cold winter. I suppose living in NJ, I don’t have that choice! I’ll take sand over snow any day!
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At least you have access to sand and beaches in the summer. I miss that living in Arkansas.
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True. A mere 60 minute ride and I’m there. You’ll just have to move closer to the shore!
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Yes, I’ve considered moving.
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Oh! Perhaps new adventures in your future!
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I do love snow, Dorinda.
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I only like the first snow. After that, it’s too cold for my liking.
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I feel like that about the heat we get here, Dorinda. When it reaches over 30 degrees Celsius, it is to hot for me.
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I sympathize! I’m not a big heat person either. I like autumn. Perfect for me. 🙂
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It doesn’t take snow for me to think this… Ha… ;-)))
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LOL Agreed!!!
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Love it! Yes, we do!
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Thank you, V.J.!! Nothing but white (cold) sand here. lol Not liking snow before winter officially gets here!
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I know what you mean. Snow just in time for Christmas is acceptable, lol.
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Yes! The first snowfall should be Christmas Eve.
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aah so gentle and lovely! I can daydream that for hours! 🙂
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Thank you, Neha! How much snow do you have? We got several inches, but it’s melting. It can keep doing that as far as I’m concerned. LOL
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We got about 14 inches from the storm last week…but it is almost melted now…had sunny days all week so far but might snow again tomorrow…in Denver it doesn’t stick for too long cause the sun is usually out the next day 🤞 besides I will take a short winter any day haha
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I could pass on winter completely lol
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hehe yes I would be okay with that too!
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Exquisite 👏
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Thank you very much! 🙂
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My kind of daydreaming!
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Mine, too! Way too cold here for early December!!
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Brrrr!!!!
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Sigh… I do dream of my Californian beaches. I miss them so much.
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Time to make a trip to the states! 😉
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Overdue 😎
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We’re on the same hazy wave length!
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Kindred spirits!
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