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Why is it I don’t recognize, the face reflected back at me?
What is it about her look, I no longer wish to see?
Sunken, hollowed cheeks, color pale, in shades of white
Turn away, bow my head, I can’t take my ghostly sight
Missing is the sparkle, once, so prominent in these eyes
Replaced by tears of sadness, rushing, falling, from my eyes
No strength to fight the demon, it’s taking all I’ve got
Too weak to go on trying, yet too stubborn, to accept this lot
Determined for a comeback, keep my focus on the prize
Restore myself, back to life, there is no compromise.
Authors note: I am still unwell, trying to find the end of this madness. Four weeks and counting. I know what it isn’t, but not what it is. I see a specialist on Wednesday. I pray I finally find out what demon decided my body was its new home so I can evict it immediately! I miss you all and hope you are well. ❤
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Photo via Pixabay CC0
Angela Prendergast said:
Stunning language. “I know what it isn’t… but not what it is.” I totally feel this.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Angela ❤
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Hina said:
It’s a beautiful poem..
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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robertawrites235681907 said:
I am so sorry you are still ill, Dorinda. Sending prayers and healing thoughts your way.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Robbie. I am ok. “Unrecognizable” was written in August and seems to have a life of its own!!
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Daniel Kemp said:
I really loved that poem. We don’t know each other and you may think my words to be insincere, but they’re not. I don’t know what troubles you, nonetheless, I wish you a hasty recovery from whatever it is.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Daniel. I appreciate your kindness. I’m doing much better. 🙂
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edwardky2 said:
Reblogged this on Ed;s Site..
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so very much for sharing, Ed! 🙂
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ahsnatkhan said:
Beautiful!!!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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Angela Prendergast said:
Beautiful. Raw and real. I hope you are doing okay. ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Angela! On the road to recovering! ❤
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Sara Vanderstarren said:
Absolutely beautiful writing ❤ Wishing all the best for you and your recovery! x.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much, Sara! ❤
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Spoken Expressions said:
Expressed lovely, great work… I wish you well.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you ❤️
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Tim A. F. Schuler said:
A beautiful piece, I can sometimes relate!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so very much, Tim! 🙂
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Harry said:
Absolutely brilliant writing!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Harry! 🙂
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@_her.feels said:
Wow that is a beautiful
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! 🙂
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Mistella said:
Lines are beautifully penned. I don’t know much about your problem as I read you for the first time, but my heart says things are gonna be positive and bright very soon❤️
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! I hope your heart is right ❤
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Sensual Life said:
Thoughts are with you, you write in a way as I do when I am alone turning my thoughts inward , is a scary process and the bravery you need to recognize for allowing us in. Thank you!!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! Let it out, it does wonders for your psyche! 🙂
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ak.nkwocha said:
Wow. I’ve always found it hard to write short poems. I always feel rushed. This was beautiful 💕
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much. Remember, there is no set rule to the length of a poem unless you’re writing a specific one, like Haiku or Tanka.
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Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. said:
I hope that you have more answers now Dorinda and that you are on the road to recovery…♥
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Sally. I do, and I am. It’s a long road ahead but I’m ready 🙂 ❤
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Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. said:
Good to hear Dorinda and if there is anything that I can do on the blog or book promotion side to help, please let me know. ♥
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Dorinda Duclos said:
You’re awesome, Sally. Thank you. Right now I’m wading…’ll let you know when I’m ready to dive in 🙂
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Smorgasbord - Variety is the Spice of Life. said:
okay..♥
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meenawalia said:
Praying for your speedy recovery.lots of love.Stay strong.God bless!!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much! ❤
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Lakayla Perry said:
I love this.. I am fighting demons myself. I am also a writer go check out my work
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you. Keep fighting! ❤
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Bhagyashree said:
This is a wonderful post, Dorinda. You writing style reminded me of Sylvia Plath. Great imagery, expressions and phrases. Loved your poem!
I hope you are fine now 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much!! On the road to recovery! ❤
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~M said:
Keep fighting D… love you… ❤️xo
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I am, M! Love you! ❤
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D. Wallace Peach said:
I’m so sorry to hear you’re unwell, Dorinda. Four weeks is way too long. I hope you get some answers soon. ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks, Diana. Sorry it’s taken so long to respond. It’s been a rough road, but hoping it’s paved now. lol ❤
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D. Wallace Peach said:
I was just going to check in on you today. I’m glad to hear that your on smoother ground. 😀
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, D. ❤️
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Poetry for Finding Meaning in the Madness said:
Beautiful and so Honest! What a great poem!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much 😊
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OMEIZA DEBORAH said:
Sending my ❤️ to you. You’ll get well soonest. Great poem!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! ❤️
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Michael said:
Stay strong D x
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Only choice, Michael! 😊
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Sue Vincent said:
Hope they can give you some answers, Dorinda. Not knowing what you are fighting is horrible. x
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Sue. It’s been rough but getting better. ❤️
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Sue Vincent said:
Glad to hear that, Dorinda ❤
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thereluctantpoet said:
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Chuck xoxo
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Jewels said:
So sorry to hear this, Dorinda. Hope you find some answers tomorrow at the specialist. But more so, I hope you get better. Sending love, prayers and good vibes your way… 💞
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Julie. Some answers, yes, but not all. That’s what’s so frustrating. ❤️
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Jewels said:
Hang in there and take care ❤
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thereluctantpoet said:
Thank you so much for finding the time to share with us, Dorinda!! Sending you best wishes, thoughts and loads of prayers!!
LAH
xoxoxo
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so much, Chuck xoxo
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V.J. Knutson said:
Oh, Dorinda – so sorry you are going through this. so frustrating. Hope your next appointment has some answers.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, VJ. I got some answers but still need to rule out more. I’m pooped! lol
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V.J. Knutson said:
I’m sure you are. Glad you have some answers. Take care.
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What Words May Come said:
We miss you terribly too! I hope and prayer for you to feel better! Loved this poem too, by the way! All the best!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks, Kevin. I haven’t been reading but I did catch your post about your book! Congratulations!! That’s awesome news. 💕
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What Words May Come said:
Thank you, Dorinda! I hope you are well and things are going better!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
You’re welcome! I’m still sick but feeling a bit better. There is a long recovery ahead for me. I’ll probably write about it lol
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What Words May Come said:
Hi Dorinda, you know you are always in my prayers. I’m just now getting back to WP after vacation, so that’s why the delayed response. Take good care of yourself!!! ;-)))
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Kevin! Hope you had a great time 🙂
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Cookie said:
You are stronger then any demon and you shall be freed. Believe. I identify with the sentiments. Be well, my friend…Be well.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’m working on it, Cookie ❤️
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jenanita01 said:
Such a beautiful and powerful poem, Dorinda, so sorry to hear of your distress…
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Jaye. ❤️
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Fandango said:
I hope you get to the bottom of whatever this thing is and that you start to feel better.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, my friend. I’m working on it! 😊
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ladieswholunchreviews said:
Oh, my friend, I’m so sorry you are going through this! Sending lots and lots of hugs and prayers for healing 💕💕
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, D! ❤️
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syl65 said:
Praying for you in the name of Jesus.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you so very much, Syl 🙏💕
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syl65 said:
You are very welcome, Dorinda 🙏🏽❤️
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youlittlecharmer said:
Great post. Brilliantly written and oh so relatable. Be well 🖤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much. 😊
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youlittlecharmer said:
No problem… Compliment sincerely meant 👍🖤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
❤️
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oneta hayes said:
Thanks for the check in, Dorinda. So sorry about the ill health. You are still a master at the poetry. This is powerful – and sad.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Oneta. ❤️
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Susan said:
I send you my love and wishes to get well soon
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Susan ❤️
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Penny Wilson Writes said:
Sending hugs and prayers! ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Penny ❤️
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GrannyMoon said:
Take care dear sister!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, GM!! Sorry for the late reply!! ❤
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myplace3187 said:
Hello Dorinda I pray you will find out and be able to get over this with the Doctor’s help with medication. Sounds like it is not good after four weeks and I agree it sucks big time. All the best and keep being positive and happy.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, James. I’m trying! 😊
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myplace3187 said:
Awesome Dorinda ! Keep smiling and remember I am not the only blogger who wishes you the best !
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Annette Rochelle Aben said:
Holding you in the healing, white light of Christ!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Amen, sister! And I for you. ❤️🙏
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Mathew | Blog of the Wolf Boy said:
Very good 😀
I can feel your heart in that one
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Mathew. Definitely came from deep within. 😊
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