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Mama always warned her girls
They best behave when on a date
But those two had a better idea
Words of wisdom, now too late
Once out the door, and in the car
They’d speed away, into the night
Find a place, they could change
Hit the scene, oh boy, what a sight
No longer were they demure ladies
So sweet, when they left the house
Now they were both quite deviant
One was even missing her blouse!
Come-hither eyes and lollipop grins
The guys were knocked off their feet
That is, until Bessy opened her mouth
Making most fellows, quickly, retreat
Not everything is as good as it looks
Better wait, before you praise and laud
The packaging may look great outside
But, sometimes, the product is flawed
February Writing Prompts – Deviant daughters – Day 23/28
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thereluctantpoet said:
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
Deliciously delectable, delightfully deviant, dirty darlings! 😊💛
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Definitely 😊💛
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
😊💛💜
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Erika Kind said:
Haha, yes, better look twice 😅
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Always!! lol
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Erika Kind said:
Hehe!!
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SarahC said:
Ack! (wink) too fuunny!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks, Sarah 😉
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balroop2013 said:
Nice advice to youngsters! Thanks for the smiles Dorinda.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Balroop. Enjoy your weekend 🙂
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Captain Q said:
This made me smile. Thank you, Dorinda. 😃
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks, C!! 🙂
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Elizabeth Anne Ives said:
Touche! Well done and such fun!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much!
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Ritu said:
He he!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
A bit of silly for a Saturday 😉
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Ritu said:
Love it 😁
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Dorinda Duclos said:
❤
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robertawrites235681907 said:
This is hilarious, Dorinda.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Robbie!
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D. Wallace Peach said:
Ha. Yup, sometimes the packaging is much better than the product. A fun poem that made me thankful for my modest daughter!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Mine also!! Thanks, D!
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AdnamaMarais.wordpress.com said:
Brilliant. 🙂💞
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks, Amanda! 🙂
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AdnamaMarais.wordpress.com said:
My Pleasure.
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