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If you could only see trees and sky?
Rain puddles, gather in your nose
Upside down tears, that go awry
Eating could also be a real hassle
More in your eyes, and on your face
The hair, on the top of your head
Will always seem to look out of place
I’d imagine that’s how it would be
If we couldn’t get up, off the ground
Much like a statue, carved in stone
It would be pretty hard to get around
All the simpleminded things we do
Are quite small, in total retrospect
Then reality comes, kicks us in the ass
And you realize, it’s a pain in the neck
February Writing Prompts – Simpleminded twists – Day 22/28
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Miriam Hurdle said:
We need to ask those questions to the self. Dorinda. Clever. ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
We do. Thank you, Miriam. ❤
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Miriam Hurdle said:
You’re welcome, Dorinda ❤
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jenanita01 said:
Reblogged this on anita dawes and jaye marie.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, ladies!! ❤
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robertawrites235681907 said:
Great words, Dorinda.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Robbie! ❤
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
We would be bigger messes than we already are.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
That’s what the kick in the ass if for. LOL
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
LOL
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Dorinda Duclos said:
😀
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