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I
Could stand
On the shore
Forevermore
Watching the sunset
My feet, in cool water
As I breathe in salty air
Letting it touch my soul, my core
Washing away, the hurt and sorrow
That, which has often left me, on the edge
February Writing Prompts – The edge of forever – Day 3/28
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Oh these are hard to do! 😉
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They can make you nuts lol
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Yes they can!
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So beautiful. I would be there with you.
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And I would be honored to have you there, my friend ❤
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Soothing words, Dorinda. 🙏🏽
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Thank you very much, Syl. Have a beautiful Sunday. 🙏🏽 🙂
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You’re welcome, Dorinda. Have a beautiful Monday. 😊🙏🏽
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You, too, my friend (although it’s almost over, so on to Tuesday! lol) 🙂
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LOL, still appreciated! 🙂
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I miss the ocean so very much, I could really connect with this. And also, I do love Etheree…so I’m not sure how the point system works, but how about double points? 🙂
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Works for me lol Thanks so much, Ethan!! 🙂
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I wish I lived closer to the ocean. I haven’t seen it in forever 😦
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I’m only an hour away and I’m guilty of the same…sigh
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Hope I get a sunset worthy of doing so.
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Every sunset is worthy, you just have to look at it ❤
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True. 🙂🌅
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I could do this too. I plan too when I go to Newquay this year sometime.
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Such moments are balsamy for the soul and fuel for the whole system! Great poem, Dorinda!
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Thank you, Erika!! ❤
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You are welcome!
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Lovely
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Thank you very much, Lokesh 🙂
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A beautiful etheree Dorinda..
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Thank you very much, Mich! 🙂
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