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The lovely Helene of Willow Poetry has challenged us with “What do you See?”. You may write a poem, haiku, tanka or short story that represents what you see or feel within you. More info can be found in the link below.
In keeping with the dark theme that always accompanies Halloween, I have written this poem.
An open door, in which to climb
Barred by metal fences, twined
I can only peer into the dark
And hope the sun creates a spark
To light the inner chamber, where
So many have be locked, in there
Let me free them, from this cell
Unlock these wicked Gates of Hell
Where no man, has been freed
Thrown aside, for sins, and greed
But I know better, the Devil’s game
Sadistic, he, never taking blame
I’ve called him out, I’ve come to fight
To save these humans from their plight.
But who will come, to rescue me
And save me from this…insanity
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joylennick said:
Such a strong, heartfelt poem, Dorinda. Beautifully composed. x
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so very much, Joy! ❤️
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Jordan said:
Great poem Dorinda!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Jordan! 🙂
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
I’ll save you! Maybe. Let me think about it and get back to you. Oh, and I love it when you open the door to your dark side. ☺❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
The door’s falling off its hinges these days lol 🙂 ❤
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
Time for a handyman! ☺💛
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Hélène Vaillant said:
An appropriate story for the prompt and this time of year. You created a vivid picture through your words. Lovely poetry Dorinda.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Helene! I greatly appreciate your comment ❤
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Hélène Vaillant said:
You are welcome Dorinda.
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thespiritkeeper said:
Been there I’ll save you Dorinda lol
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh, good, someone who’s as crazy as me LOL Thanks, Joseph 🙂
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Johnny Ojanpera said:
Hi Dorinda. I started over at http://www.jojanpera.wordpress.com. Hope to see you around. Nice work here! 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Hey Johnny! Thanks for letting me know. Thank you! 🙂
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Penny Wilson Writes said:
wow! Love this! ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much! My dark side likes to come out around Halloween (and every other day of the year) 😉
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