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Storm
Thunder
In my mind
Creates visions
Ones that do linger
Forcing me to escape
Into my own awareness
A place, profound, as is subtle
Yet, to truly understand your fate
One must make sense of their very own soul
This is my first attempt at an etheree poem. Info on how to write one can be found HERE. Many thanks to Helene Vaillant of Willow Poetry for creating in this form and to Colleen Chesebro for researching and adding this to her weekly poetry challenge.
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
Another excellent etheree! ☺❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you kindly, my friend 🙂 ❤
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Walt Page, The Tennessee Poet said:
My pleasure! ☺❤
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Bernie Delaney said:
Really interesting format and the poem itself is very thought-provoking. Thank you also for the added links on relevant information.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Bernie! It was definitely fun to do! 🙂
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Hope said:
Great! Something different, unusual, smart thinking.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Yes, something different. You’d have to thank Helene Vaillant. She brought it forward, we’re just picking up on it 🙂
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Jacob C. Edwards said:
This is the first etheree poem I’ve ever read, it looks interesting! I’ll have to try my hand at one.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I hope you do! It’s an interesting form. Be sure to read the rules 😉
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Jacob C. Edwards said:
Will do! I definitely have to try my hand, its visually pretty beautiful to look at
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Looks like a pine tree. 🙂
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Michael said:
Super cool!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much! 🙂
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