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She covers her face, weeps into her hand
Leaning against barren stretches of sand
And the trees behind her, though silent and still
Offer no shelter from the penetrating chill
She is forlorn and helpless, no hope to be found
Marked by the cross, that lies in the ground
A lover departed, she longs for his touch
And he reaches for her, with the windβs gentle rush
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Photo: Pixabay
This was so beautiful. A great piece of writing Dorinda.
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Thanks so very much, Drew π
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This is awesome poetry Dorinda! Absolutely wonderful. βΊβ€
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Thank you very much, dear Walt! π β€
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You’re very welcome dear friend. I so enjoy your writing. βΊπ
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Thanks so much, Walt. The feeling is mutual (said like Teri Garr in Young Frankenstein lol)
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You’re very welcome, and I know it’s mutual. βΊβ€
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Lovely ending.
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Thank you very much, Cathi! π
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Beautiful poetry! Picture is outstanding! π·
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Thank you very much, Hope! π
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Wow, sad but very romantic too. Love as an eternal bond. Touching!
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Romantic Friday? π Thanks so much, Erika! β€
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Ha, perhaps, every day would deserve to be romantic actually, right? But really, this was very touching.
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Romance is always welcomed any day π Thank you again, dear friend π
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Standing at the edge of going or staying… βΊπ
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Whichever way the wind takes you… π β€
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I think I’ll stay. βΊπ
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I think thatβs a grand idea ππ
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Thought you might βΊβ€
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Beautiful!
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Thank you very much, Betty! π
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Equal parts beautiful and sad…
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Thank you so very much! π
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My pleasure!π
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