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Too many people, inside of my head
Most fill the hours, with sorrow or dread
Nothing makes sense, I just want to shout
The only way through, has no way out
I’m stuck here, inside me, what can I do?
I’m feeling so foolish, I wish that I knew
How to get rid of the confusion, so snide
It ruffles my feathers and flattens my pride
There’s too much noise, as it swirls all around
I need to plant my feet, on more solid ground
Though I try to quiet my brain, as I lie here, instead
Still seems like I’m drowning, in a nonsensical head
March Writing Prompt: Nonsensical Hodgepodge – Day 23/31
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thelonelyauthorblog said:
Too many people, inside of my head
Most fill the hours, with sorrow or dread
My favorite two lines. Well done
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you very much, Drew. 🙂
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The Militant Negro said:
Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you for sharing! ❤
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V.J. Knutson said:
Yikes! Sounds like me.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh boy, that’s not good!! Two of us in the same boat? Life jacket?
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V.J. Knutson said:
ha ha…maybe
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Dorinda Duclos said:
ok, we’ll both paddle. It’ll go faster lol
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V.J. Knutson said:
perfect plan….lol
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’ll pick you up on the way by 🙂
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V.J. Knutson said:
even better…
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Kritika said:
Nice post. Relatable
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! Hopefully not too much so 🙂
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Kritika said:
Hahaha…actually it was very and such thoughts have regular occurrence too. 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh dear. I’ll throw you a life preserver!
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