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She found it harder each day, to face the pain
Alone by the window, wondering again
How time could steel her life away
And why the agony she felt each day
Could cause so much hatred, in one woman’s heart
A prolonged destruction, which kept her apart
From the world outside, the place she’d known best
Now no longer a haven, or place she could rest
Instead she sits curled up, dark against light
Hair in her face, obscuring her sight
She no longer wishes to dwell here alone
Unlocking the window, she sends herself home
According to the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention (CDC), in 2015:
- Suicide was the tenth leading cause of death overall in the United States, claiming the lives of more than 44,000 people.
- Suicide was the third leading cause of death among individuals between the ages of 10 and 14, and the second leading cause of death among individuals between the ages of 15 and 34.
- There were more than twice as many suicides (44,193) in the United States as there were homicides (17,793).
If you know someone who is struggling with life, reach out, show them you care. You could be saving their life.
National Suicide Prevention Hotline: Call 1-800-273-8255
Writing Prompt – Prolonged Agony – Day 4/30
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derrickjknight said:
So well stated
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WaltPage said:
Such a heart wrenching piece that needed to be written to make people aware of this alarming problem. God bless you for posting this dear friend. Hugs to you 😃💛❤
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marandarussell said:
Really touching, and some sad statistics.
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you, Maranda. Heart wrenching 😦
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Erika Kind said:
When someone doesn’t find a different way out than suicide is terrible enough. But it is the worst when already children killing themselves. Society needs to wake up, finally!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I think the issue of cyber bullying must be brought to the forefront. Too many hide behind a screen and never face the consequences of their actions.
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Erika Kind said:
And they are often closer than we might think…
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~M said:
This is exactly how I feel today… It’s like you’ve written it for me. 😦 Not giving up though…
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh no!! Never the way to solve problems, my friend. I’m here for you. I know today is a very tough day. I’m only an email or message away ❤
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~M said:
I know…. I’m better today, despite all that’s transpired in the last 24 hours. Thank you for being such a caring friend. ❤️
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Seenorway said:
A dangerous road to tread, Dorinda! You shouldn’t be going down that road!
Not at all! Leave your window closed, but get out there. Enjoy the sunshine, the fresh air, the company of friends, – life!!!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh my, not me! Thank you for your concern. I’m fine!! I had read an article about the suicide rates escalating and it triggered this poem. I promise, I’m good. I have too much to live for ❤
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you for reblogging ❤
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