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In her thoughts, she could see only him
Hear the sound of his voice, a whisper
Sending shivers through her body
Her unassuming, unpretentious ways
Giving delight to his darkness
While deep inside of him, lurking
Where he found her most amusing
He would watch her from afar
Never close enough for her to feel
He was merely a distant pleasure
In the madness of her mind
Writing Prompt – Unassuming Diversions – Day 2/30
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Erika Kind said:
Oh, beautiful madness…
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Dorinda Duclos said:
My favorite kind 😉
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Erika Kind said:
Hehe…….. 😉
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you for sharing! ❤
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crasbo said:
Marvelous
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you! 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thank you for sharing ❤
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Original-Dante said:
Mind = *explosion*
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Oh my, that could get messy! Thanks so much “Dante” 🙂
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Original-Dante said:
Hahaha I like how you always do that “Dante” thing… Keeping me incognito 😎
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Dorinda Duclos said:
yeah, well, you haven’t been around much, so I’ve forgotten your name (j/k) LOL
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Original-Dante said:
😂 Oh come now… Im always with you in spirit 😉
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Dorinda Duclos said:
spirit, huh? That could explain your disappearing act. I hope you’re well, Michael 🙂
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Original-Dante said:
Im great Dorinda, as I hope you are too 🙂 (no more disappearing)
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’m going to hold you to that!! Glad to hear you’re well. I’m hanging in there 🙂
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~M said:
Love this one. The last two lines say it all…
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Michelle. I am determined to do all 30 days, not sure how lol probably in my sleep!
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~M said:
Well I’m glad you are, at least one of us will be! Lol… I’ve decided I’m not going to stick to any sort of dedicated schedule this month like I had originally planned. My body isn’t cooperating right now and so I’m just going with whatever comes and not trying to stress myself out further. Think I just need a break from the norm. I hope your mother is doing better. And I hope you are too! Glad you’re staying committed to this. It makes me want to try harder myself. 😉
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Dorinda Duclos said:
If I don’t stay committed to something, I will be committed!! It’s a great diversion from all the stress of every day, although my pieces are rather dark. Always an indication of how my life is going. Mom is getting there. I, however, am going through more difficult times. It’s probably the stress. I’m sorry you’re not feeling well. do take care of you! ❤
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~M said:
Lol… I love how you put that. I think your poems have been great as always. Keep looking up! 😉
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Dorinda Duclos said:
I’m trying!! Thanks, my friend! ❤
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~M said:
❤️ xo
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Kevin J. Hotter said:
*work (😁)
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Dorinda Duclos said:
😀
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Kevin J. Hotter said:
Nice 😎. Smooth words. Great works as usual!
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Dorinda Duclos said:
Thanks so much, Kevin!! How did your show go? Sorry I’m so late in asking
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Kevin J. Hotter said:
It went great! The audience was really fun. 200 people in the crowd. And the energy was electric. It was me (opener), the feature and the headliner. Everyone did great. Honestly, I will always remember that evening as a big moment for me regarding my stand up. Thanks so much for asking! (PS. Just posted a poem on my blog. Hope you – my poet friend – enjoy it).
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Dorinda Duclos said:
So happy to hear!!! I’m still waiting for you to head back this way 🙂 I’m a bit slow in reading these days, but I promise I’ll check it out!
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Kevin J. Hotter said:
Doing a show in NY will be a homecoming. Most of my family and close friends live in that region. I will certainly let you know! 🙂
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Dorinda Duclos said:
😀
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